Chapter 14 – Demon Queen – Page 20

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  1. Profile photo instant nocorner itxtalt of Tom Caldwell

    I was trying here to get across them communicating through pictures. I’m not exactly happy with the way the page turned out. So perhaps it doesn’t work to move the story along as I thought it would. In any case it is what it is.

  2. Profile photo instant nocorner itxtalt of zenla

    Ah the joy of possesing slaves I mean servants meaning underlings no wait retainers? Maybe Vassals? Queen’s smile sure is supicious.

    • Profile photo instant nocorner itxtalt of xpacetrue

      To have the Demon Queen by her side should really raise Queen Caitlin’s already impressive reputation. It might make the Shinas think twice about crossing her. And it may help her bring the Water Clan back into the fold.

      However, Lilith is a queen, too – the first queen to unite the clans. Indeed, if I were Caitlin I’d be a little worried that Lilith would challenge her for control.

      That said: From the dream visits, we do know that Lilith acknowledges Caitlin as “Future Queen.” And from a conversation with the former King in the first chapter, we know Lilith at least talked to him in his dreams, as well. Indeed, it seemed Lilith told the king to find Caitlin and make her their queen.

      • Profile photo instant nocorner itxtalt of Tom Caldwell

        Some good observations here. Most will be addressed in this chapter. The demon queen did tell the old king to send for caitlin.

  3. Profile photo instant nocorner itxtalt of dragonrider

    Question here, if this is something you’re planning on expanding on later apologies and not trying to knock a very enjoyable story.

    Now the “Demon Queen” is Lilith and her Kingdom was Eden. According to the Torah Lilith was Adam’s first wife and left him. Eden was guarded by Angels with “Swords of Fire” to keep everything outside the wall. When Lilith used the “Word of Power” ,given her by Yahweh after her creation, to fly over the walls and escape, three angels Senoi, Sansenoi, and Semangelof were sent after her. By using the “Word of Power” she stayed seduced a devil and gave birth to the race of night demons according to legend these were Vampires. Who was Lilith fighting with when she was rescued?

    • Profile photo instant nocorner itxtalt of Tom Caldwell

      Although our queen is the Lilith from the legend. I don’t intend to follow in the legends story. In my world the legend of lilith is but a fragment leftover telling of the first queen and The Migration south.

      • Profile photo instant nocorner itxtalt of dragonrider

        Thanks for the reply, as I said have been reading this for a couple years or more, great read. I just follow the several versions of the Lilith tale, Lilit in Babylonian texts, as it is one of several constants in in various cultures.

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  1. Profile photo instant nocorner itxtalt of squalllion

    great for you. thanks to this person.

  2. Profile photo instant nocorner itxtalt of dragonrider

    Thanks for the reply, as I said have been reading this for a couple years or more, great read. I just follow the several versions of the Lilith tale, Lilit in Babylonian texts, as it is one of several constants in in various cultures.

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